We had to write about a short story about a clam place with one noise, a little thing it could be funny it could be scary it could be anything and to build up suspense for a bigger problem latter and a solution its like a beginning of a story its called a sizzling start.
My one for example
The forest…
The forest was silent at 1 pm. The only sound was birds singing in the tree I went down the forest. Then I fell into a hole “boom crash thud” onto a seat I tried to run away but I couldn’t then I tried again and again and again. Then suddenly I felt like I was watched then I floated back out of the hole then I ran home until I saw a man called Bob and he said “hi” I said “hi” back. I ran back home while I ran home I turned around quickly because I heard a twig snap. then I thought Bob was behind me but there was no one in sight I keeped running I went to my couch and dived on my couch and then I thought there a person behind me.
Then I new there was someone or something…